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The Face of Nothingness

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The Face of Nothingness


Cold and empty

That’s what I see whenever I look into his eyes

He has no mercy or rules to restrain him

The black around his eyes reflect what’s inside his soul:

Insanity and evil

The white make-up on his face brings no light, but an ominous shadow on Gotham City

The red on his lips and Glasgow smile are from the blood of his victims and fire (because everything burns)

And there is a message in those dark eyes, the white make-up he wears and the scars:

“Why so serious?"

Happy Halloween everyone! This is my special piece of writing for this fun holiday. I hope you guys like it.

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This is nice overall. I think that the artist mentally painted a good picture of the character. I believe that if the artist was to do more of these, a more detailed approach would be a good start. Using a villain is different way to go because everyone always root for the hero and the villains are sometimes not as featured as before. The artist is a great writer and i believe that with practice, they can have a bright future with writing. This work for me seemed to be a start of a great project in the future if they continue to work hard.